The Feel

Sarmad Wattoo 1994 (Bahawalnagar)



Dismay tests the strength of emotion
Love tests the strength of devotion

Hold both and you'll succeed
One person to give all is what you need

You are the person for whom I can bear every sorrow
With a smile and hope to wake up with you every tomorrow

You please my heart with every gesture
You are created in such a beautiful texture

There are no chests or secrets  that I hid
I opened myself to you because my heart lit

You I want you I wish you I desire
There's no cold left but only fire

The taste of loving you is so addictive
You keep me on my toes you're so vindictive

My heart pours my soul shouts
Hear it saying love you without doubts

I'm so lucky you're the most beautiful find
I was looking around before as I was blind

I will never let you go no matter what may come
Shatters me such thought without you, my heart beats like a drum

Hold my hand and we shall March forward with zeal
Together we can have anything and everything don't you feel

Open eyes and give a smile that's all I want
With you I share Because you're my confidant

About this poem

I wrote this poem a while ago. I was standing thinking about the one.

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Written on February 18, 2023

Submitted by wattoo23467 on April 12, 2023

Modified on April 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD XX DD EE FF GG HH II JJ
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,068
Words 231
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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