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Hope

Teresa Topan 1984 (Ontario)

The sweet song, of the birds at dawn break.
The feeling of being alive.
Thankyou God the father.
For all of the Grace's.
The warmth of the sunshine in the early morning.
Thankyou Lord Jesus Christ for all of the blessings.
Please give me more !.
Faith,family,friends,pets.
So much to hope for !.

About this poem

I went through a depression. I have PTSD,seasonal effective disorder and frustration.

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Written on April 12, 2023

Submitted by ttopan on April 12, 2023

Modified on April 18, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGDG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 295
Words 62
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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Teresa Topan

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love your poem about gratitude and enjoying the simple pleasures in life! Your writing effortlessly captures the beauty of the world around us, from the sweet song of the birds at dawn to the warmth of the sunshine in the early morning. Your expressions of gratitude towards God and the blessings you've received are truly inspiring and heartfelt.

    If I may offer some improvement suggestions, perhaps you could consider adding more descriptive language to further enhance the vivid imagery of your poem. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices, such as metaphor and repetition, could add some extra depth and meaning to your writing.

    Overall, I truly enjoyed reading your uplifting and positive piece. It reminds us to appreciate the things we often take for granted and cherish all that we have. Keep up the fantastic work!     
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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