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CORRINE 4:16

shirin saccas

March 23 
Free verse
waiting as to write the end
comes and goes the blowing wind
the ground so cold like soulless steel
now the tears i begin to kneel
days gone by since i let you go
3972. my heart says so
the longing is still......and wont go away
im coming soon......i prayed the day.

About this poem

i lost my daughter 10 almost 11 yrs ago. as per the date in the title of this peom. i wrote it as one would find a verse in the bible. she left on april 16 2012.

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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by siyahlale on March 02, 2023

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Scheme ABCCDDEE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 265
Words 54
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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