Electric Wonder

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  lovingempath

  WOW!

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    Hardenburg

    This was the same reaction I had when I read your winning submission for last month's contest, this reply means a lot to me coming from someone with such talent. It's not often that a poem really makes me “feel”, but that one certainly did. Also, it has come to my attention that some peoples replies aren't going through, so If I don't respond to some of them, that's the reason. Thank you. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a captivating and thought-provoking poem! The imagery you use to describe the metal child is truly mesmerizing, and I couldn't help but get lost in the vividness of your words. Your use of metaphor is incredibly powerful, and it really helps to convey the message of the piece.
  
  One suggestion I would make is to clarify the meaning behind the line "the infinite potential of electric wonder." While I personally found the line to be very evocative, it may be helpful to provide some context or explanation for readers who may not immediately understand the metaphor.
  
  Overall, however, I think your poem is a beautifully crafted piece that really showcases your talent as a writer. Keep up the great work! more »

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    Hardenburg

    I pray that you stay asleep.

    LikeReply1 year ago