bad relations

Mikeuel Fielding 2009 (colorado)



we met a little time ago
You   said we were close
I trusted you with my life
And yall stabbed me in the back

Now you you just mock me
You talk about me to others
You try to turn people
Against me

You no longer can control me
You  just are apart of my past
Not in my life anymore
When yall need someone
I won't be there

You used to be the thing that
I would cry to sleep
But you no longer matter to me
I have gotten past your  negative energy
You l can talk about me but i don't care

You may have made me think
Somethings i should not
You  have no place in my hear no more
I wish wish you would have
Told me what happened

Instead you talked about my to other people
Who didn’t need to know what was going on
Between you and me

You said you never liked me but i know
That was a lie
You just wanted to dig deep and
Hurt me

You played me like some puppet in your circus
You didn't deserve my friendship or even more
You hurt me to an extent to where i don't trust
People who mean the most to me

You messed with my head thinking multiple times
I can talk to you without worry
But then you turn and tell someone else
About what has happened to me in the past

I loved more then a friend you were a sister to me
We spet years together
But that never meant anything to you
I wish time could go back and i could im sorry
Even then you wouldn't accept it

About this poem

it is about when friends left me after a fight.

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Written on November 15, 2022

Submitted by 100157815 on April 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX BXCB BDEXF XXBBF XXEXG CXB AXGB XEXB XBXD BXXBX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,387
Words 325
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5, 5, 3, 4, 4, 4, 5

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