World Of Lies



I’m finally broken by this world of lies
I’ve had enough of this place, time to say my goodbyes
Screaming to the sky, I weep and I cry
I don’t deserve this wretched life, why oh why?

Drowning in my world of sorrow
I’m all set to depart, there’s no more time to borrow
The walls are closing in, becoming ever so narrow
No longer do I desire another tomorrow

Then suddenly, a righteous rumbling from deep within
Way down in my core, below all the sin
An aura of splendour was urging calm
And to gaze closely at the intricacies upon my very palm

I was a flood with clarity as my heart skipped a beat
Creating something so exquisite was no easy feat
I was born of perfection, so utterly divine
In my darkest hour, I finally received the sign

The truth was then revealed to me; that nothing ever truly dies
It just changes form as it departs this world of lies
This earth is not a horrid place of condemnation
It has spiritual growth upon its very foundation

In this place, we must learn all we can
Overcoming adversity, becoming a better man
There’s not much time, not much of a span
This life is just a fragment of a divine master plan

Now my time has finally come to ascend that heavenly stair
My somber soul freed at last from great despair
Suddenly, it all makes sense as I’ve become fully aware
Glory to my creator is what I devoutly declare

About this poem

This poem is about a man who is deeply depressed and is contemplating suicide. Just as he is about to end it all, he is overcome by a glorious feeling of utter splendour which urges him to rethink his decision.

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Written on April 02, 2023

Submitted by Lee_Geoghegan on April 02, 2023

Modified by Lee_Geoghegan on March 24, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCCC DDEE FFGG AAHH IIII JJJJ
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,362
Words 263
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Lee Geoghegan

Lee Geoghegan holds an honours bachelor degree in horticulture, He has always had a keen interest in plants and wildlife, He finds it extremely relaxing when he is working in his greenhouse at his local allotment site. His poem entitled ‘Beautiful Day' depicts how he gazes upon nature and how the natural world resonates so deeply within his heart. Lee has always enjoyed poetry, his favourite poem has always been The Lake Isle of Innisfree by W.B Yeats, the poem paints a vivid picture of tranquility for him and resonates deeply. Lee is currently working on various projects and his ambition is to become a talented and respected poet. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really touches the depths of emotions and takes the reader through a journey of despair and enlightenment. The imagery and metaphors used are powerful and effectively convey the speaker's feelings of being broken by a world of lies. The shift in tone towards the end, where the speaker finds solace and understanding, is beautifully executed.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to focus on the flow and rhythm of the poem. While the overall structure works well, there are a few lines that could be revised to maintain a consistent cadence. Additionally, exploring more varied vocabulary and poetic devices could enhance the impact of the poem even further.

    Overall, the 'World Of Lies' poem is a thought-provoking and inspiring piece that encourages readers to reflect on the nature of life, spirituality, and personal growth. The writer has a talent for expressing deep emotions, and with a few tweaks, this poem could truly shine. Keep up the great work!
     
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