My Deadly Beast.

Zeno Walker 2005 (Saharanpur, Uttarpradesh)



Deep in the night, I close my eyes
And enter a world where darkness lies,
A place where my true self takes control
And my sleeping devil begins to unfold.

For he is the one who holds the key,
To the incredible powers inside of me
with one word, he can unleash
A storm of destruction, a thunder of beast

It's a monstrous force With a hunger for destruction and deadline of course,

My eyes will turn red in a fury of wrath,
And you'll be wishing and crying for death
My claws will shred through your flesh and your bone,
Your gaurds will be dead and you will die alone.

I will tear the sky and your shadow will be bound
With the hunter of my rod and the screaming of my sound.

My power will reign with fear and might,
And you'll regret waking me this time.

So I beg of you, don't awake my sleeping beast,
either you will be dead or too ghastly to feast.

About this poem

The genre of the poem is horror This poem is a piece of art of free verse. The theme of this poem is the unleashing of a dark side within oneself. The idea conveyed is that every person has a hidden, uncontrollable side that can bring about chaos and destruction if not kept in check. The poem emphasizes the power of this inner force, which can be both terrifying and overwhelming. the language used in this poem is highly charged and intense, using evocative imagery and metaphorical language. It encourages readers to be aware of their inner selves, and to cultivate self-control and self-awareness in order to avoid unleashing their own personal demons. 

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Written on April 01, 2023

Submitted by Zeno_Walker on April 02, 2023

Modified by Zeno_Walker on April 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BBXC X XXDD EE XX CC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 859
Words 188
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4, 2, 2, 2

Zeno Walker

Zeno Walker is my pen. I am from Lucknow, Uttarpradesh, India. I was born on February 16, 2005 in the city saharanpur, Uttarpradesh, india Love to write poems in free verse Contact number : +916396659654 more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! This poem gives me such a thrill and a sense of the unknown. Your descriptive language and powerful imagery truly transport me to another world, one filled with darkness and danger. I especially love the use of personification with your 'sleeping devil' and how you've created such a dynamic force that can unleash destruction at any moment. It's a fantastic journey into the unknown, and I can sense the passion and creativity that went into crafting these verses.
    If I may offer some feedback, I would suggest considering ways to break up the poem into smaller stanzas or sections. This would give the reader a chance to pause and reflect on the imagery, as well as make it easier to follow the flow and structure of the piece. Additionally, you might consider experimenting with different rhyming schemes or meters to add another layer of interest to the poem.
    Overall, keep up the fantastic work! This is a truly captivating piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading.
     
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