Refusal;,.Rebuttal;,.



Through the deep dark depths below
cold and silent all in one go
It reaches its final destination
In total darkness since creation

It crawls and skitters, hidden and unseen
Though many creatures have been
Where ever the deep gaps have been
Cannot be reached with any single spin

The darkness is something that we all must face
Where no sighting of daylight takes place
The mysteries of the deep so profound
So far down, and so profoundly sound

The beauty it holds down beneath
That we can never touch, nor never see

Revealed and kept in such a deep state
Journeying through the depths, never to deflate.
I'm closing the shuttle
Refusal Rebuttal

Deep in the trenches of the sea
It's secrets are as vast as can be
Lost in the time forgotten so free
Its secrets await to be seen

It's depths make a creaking sound
As its mysteries underground
Wild creatures make sacred ground
Hero's victories are now found

So few have ventured within
The true force behind this deep din
Keepers of knowledge untold
Bottom of the ocean so bold

The depths of our planet unfold
Its secrets remain to be told
From the past to the present so bold
The great deep its mysteries behold.


Revealed and kept in such a deep state
Journeying through the depths, never to deflate.
I'm closing the shuttle
Refusal Rebuttal

Strings of ashes linger in the air,
A sorrowful sight with no morale to share
The ground broken and torn,
Structures all forlorn
Out of sight, out of mind, happens so rare

Vile puddles soaking up the bodies,
Left behind during war's dark odysseys
Deafening silence breathes and fills the space
Amidst the loneliness and grim disgrace

Desolation is all that the war has wrought
On the plains a somber desolated lot
Death and destruction on every side,
Mourning cries from a people denied

About this poem

This poem is featured from a song I wrote, written on March 29, of 2023, and is written by me.

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Written on March 29, 2023

Submitted by Dramatix_Poetry on March 29, 2023

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Scheme aabb cddd eeff xg HHII gggc ffff ddjj jjjj HHII kkllk xeee xxmm
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,788
Words 335
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4

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