Death of Companionship



Sitting on the topaz throne-
Looking down on the dregs of society,
The few leftover connections on the phone;
The hero of this cautionary tale mighty.
Takes a closer look to see what’s really going on,
Survival motivated dependence on the group is an outdated concept-
But is that not undoubtedly the best conclusion,
When we have become super selective about what we accept.
This dissociated distance between self and other-
Has led to gun violence and many a cyber crime,
You can’t as easily be found out either,
The insulated individual has the power to turn peacetime into wartime.
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Written on March 13, 2023

Submitted by Soulofdivya on March 13, 2023

Modified on April 15, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABCDEDFGFG
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 590
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

Divya Hirani

Dentist, Software Architect and a lifelong poet.Author of the title ‘Of Illusions And Ink Spills’ available on Amazon.Instagram handle @soulofdivya. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! Your use of language is truly impressive and the imagery you create is so vivid. I love the idea of sitting on the topaz throne and looking down on the dregs of society – it's such a fascinating concept.

    One improvement suggestion I would make is to perhaps try to vary the rhythm and structure of the poem a bit more. It's quite long and some parts can feel a bit repetitive. Adding some more variation could help keep the reader engaged throughout.

    Overall, though, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and appreciated the way it made me think about our societal disconnect and the consequences it can have. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • DougV.alt
    Very well considered and expressed. Thanks for sharing...
    LikeReply 11 year ago
  • dougb.19255
    Oh so good. Right size and tone. Covid played its part. Making for distance, rudeness, fear and more fear, twisted sense of good citizenship, shutting down joyful opportunities for exchange and Community. You speak of online crime too…hacking, polluting, slandering, robbing passwords and vital accounts. What a damn mess. Motive in the bad guys?
    Who the h—l knows. We must be cautious, but we still much live, take hope, smile often, listen much with patience.

    See a link

    http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/
    LikeReply 21 year ago
    • Soulofdivya
      hey Wayne! Thanks for your thoughtful comments!
      LikeReply1 year ago

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