The one who’s not able
Emery Dunning 2023 (SC)
The weight going onto my arms is pain
I start to struggle and cant feel myself
I felt no accomplishment to my gains
My body start to give out on myself
I thought i saw light flash before my eyes
I was held up by my gym coach trainer
I didn't feel right like i didn't try
I couldn't see at all it was a blur
My coaches voice begin to repeat words
I couldn't smell or even hear a sound
My heart raced at a pace of beats ,its gird
I saw myself and had notice a wound
I was mad and furious and had Rage
I figured it out that it was old age
About this poem
this poem is about a guy whos in the gym. he thought he was still young and could do the same as he was young but later had problems
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Written on March 03, 2023
Submitted by Emeydunning on March 03, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCBDEFEGHIHJJ |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 548 |
Words | 128 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 14 |
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