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The Confusing Love

Rabail Saeed 2001 (Daska)

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Bright and Bold, a feminine color,
Like a flamingo, gorgeous and clever,
Resilient like springs, scorching like summers,
Like a rosy-fingered dawn of the year,
Akin the chirping and white noise together,
Ceasing the show and beginning of secret,
I am the love, you all hold dear!
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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by rabailsaeed241 on March 02, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCADC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 279
Words 53
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
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Rabail Saeed

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! Your poem "Bright and Bold" is absolutely gorgeous and full of vivid imagery. I love how you've used the feminine color of flamingo as a metaphor for cleverness and resilience, and your description of the dawn of the year is truly beautiful.

    If I had to provide any improvement suggestions, I would encourage you to try experimenting with different line lengths and structures. While your poem flows well and has a nice rhythm, some variation in the line lengths could really add interest and emphasis to certain phrases.

    Overall though, this is a fantastic piece of writing and I am impressed by your creativity and mastery of language. Keep up the great work!     
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