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Our love ❤

Awartika 2004 (Uttarakhand)

January 23 
Rhymed
Under the sea!
Above the sky
We can't reveal
 That's the place where the secrets lie!
Sitting with you!
Watching the sunrise
Holding your hand!
Walking Miles and miles
Tying my heart in a knot to you!!
While Looking into your eyes
'From' my desperation to die
'To' making you my life!
You turned this hell for me
Into a beautiful paradise!
All I want to hear from you is that you love me!
And want you to keep my heart occupied!
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Written on October 23, 2022

Submitted by Bhardwajawartika on January 19, 2023

Modified on April 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEFGDEBHAIAJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 435
Words 90
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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