Naive cigarette shit



Im so naive
Baby you know it all
Come take control

You taste like cigarettes
You cover it up with mint
Hold my hand when I go out
Hold me like a dog

Now I have nightmares  
All that naive cigarette shit
You called me one of a kind
I think Im dying

15 minutes left
Your blue baseball jacket
You smell like sweet sugary candy
What’s your name again?
He covers for me, trying to make it safe
It’s too dangerous for me
I’m so young and naive I told you

Now I wake up in terror In the middle of the night
All that naive  cigarette shit
I think I’m dying

My lemonade is poisoned
Why the f*ck would you use me?
You make me feel worthless
All those nights awake of fear

Wish someone was there to stop me
Someone please come and stop me

About this poem

This is a poem/song I wrote about struggles of me as a teen

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Submitted by yoavmatitihu on January 07, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 7, 3, 4, 2

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