Twinkling Stars and Darkening Skies: A Metaphorical Journey of the Heart



Upon the crest of time's unyielding wave,
A tempest brews within the mind's own eye,
A maelstrom of enigma, dark and grave,
That swirls with thoughts both fleeting and sly.

The wind doth howl, a dirge for what was lost,
A requiem for the dreams that slipped away,
And though the sky doth darken at all cost,
A beacon shines within the night's own gray.

The moon doth wax and wane, a cyclical dance,
A metaphor for life's eternal flow,
A cosmic symphony, both chance and chance,
That echoes through the ages, ebb and ebb.

The stars above doth twinkle, bright and far,
A cosmic tapestry, a work of art.

And though the mind doth struggle with the heart,
A flicker of enlightenment doth start,
A glimmer of hope that guides us through the dark,
A light that shines upon the path ahead,
A beacon shining bright, a guiding star.

About this poem

The poem presents a powerful imagery of a tempest brewing within the mind, with swirling thoughts that are both fleeting and sly. The use of metaphor and imagery convey the theme of internal struggle, with the wind howling as a dirge for lost dreams and the sky darkening at all costs. However, amidst the turmoil, the poem also presents a glimmer of hope in the form of a beacon shining within the night's own gray, symbolizing the cyclical dance of life's eternal flow and the cosmic symphony of chance and fate. The use of the moon waxing and waning and the stars twinkling bright and far further emphasize the theme of cosmic beauty and the fleeting nature of life. The poem also touches on the struggle between the mind and the heart, but ultimately suggests that a flicker of enlightenment and hope can guide us through the dark. The poem uses a rich vocabulary and metaphors, making it a complex and thought-provoking piece of literature. 

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Written on August 03, 2020

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on January 29, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB XCXC DXDX EF FFXXE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 826
Words 172
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 5

Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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