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EVENING OUT

Hubbs

Forgetting is not to forgive
It is pain that is held within
unless your mind is a sieve
Icicles hold on eaves melting

Early morn you break fast
Chased after noon to toil
At night it dawns you last
Dream suite no wages foil

No sweet dream amid night
Dusk to dust scurrying about
Time's hard not a day light
Hoping things are evening out
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Submitted by Hubbsify on January 27, 2023

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Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 69
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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