Patience



In the depths of self-pity, I find myself lost,
Drowning in its pool, a heavy cost.
A mere caricature of my former self,
Irrational angst impedes my path to wealth.

Perpetually trapped in a child's maze,
Empathy and understanding seem a distant phase.
We all wrestle with pits of despair,
But not everyone succumbs to their snare.

A never-ending loop in the universe's scheme,
Darkness hidden in the depths of our dream.
It grips you tight, holds you down,
The ghost of yesterday, a heavy crown.

Step out from the shadows, let the light embrace,
Where darkness falters in its empty space.
There's a path to redemption, clear and true,
Leave the dark waters, let the sun dry you.
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Written on December 20, 2022

Submitted by vfariasbu on January 18, 2023

Modified by vfariasbu on April 22, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX AABB CCDD EEFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 681
Words 137
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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