Naked Soul
I saw your naked soul in the post coital fog. For a brief moment you showed your vulnerable self. You needed me in that moment and it felt like the moon showing herself for the first time.
Then I broke a breaking that I never thought I could fix and you ran from me. I never recovered the you I knew before my breaking. Yes I say glimpses but it was not the same.
I grieve the loss of myself and the loss of you. I am not enough to fill your need and that shatters me into a thousand pieces.
Each time I draw near to you my soul crashes into the rocks of a deserted sea and I am a little bit less than I was before
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love lost
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Written on January 10, 2023
Submitted by Kaytee on January 11, 2023
Modified on May 03, 2023
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Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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