Whiskey Tears



Time and laughter disappear
 On the crest of whiskey tears

Christmas shimmers in the air
Season blest through whiskey tears

Homeless people bundled close
Dispossessed by whiskey tears

Windblown cairns of brick and glass
Coalesced from whiskey tears

Kathy went to Midnight Mass
She confessed in whiskey tears

About this poem

I used to play around with Poetry in Motion, in which a group of words are provided, and you pick out words to create a poem. The words "whiskey" and "tears" were among the choices one day while I was using Poetry in Motion. (The phrase "Whiskey Tears" was in a country song by Dierks Bentley in 2003. My poem was written in 2005 and has no relationship to the song.)

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Written on December 01, 2005

Submitted by kapagn on December 13, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XA XA BA BA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 313
Words 54
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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