Still I come out looking fresh



Still I come out looking fresh

By Karabelo Makhalemele

Though last week was very bleak
My heart was a braai stand
burning me like a steak
Still I come out looking fresh!

I might've not got leadership position
or within that organisation
Still I come out looking fresh!

Yesterday I came face to face with Bantu bloke's poverty
It insisted that I borrow money from my peer who ain't even my buddy
To survive penury,like nearly everybody
I traded my pride and dignity for shame and humiliation
Still I come out looking fresh!

My mother don't work, she's not a teacher,lawyer or clerk
My father got imprinsoned,while my mother diligently pushed me down to earth
This common musing gives me blues as the aftermath
Still I come out looking fresh

Go ahead! Spread your propaganda about me
Call me a creep or a freak
A fool or a dummy
Go ahead! Devise until your wits deplete to make my bright and sunny day grim and gloomy
Still I come out looking fresh!

I fell so many times, I hit rock bottom so multiple times
I no longer ponder on "what if I fall next time?"
Because now I know
Whether I fall flat on my face in
situations cold and blue as a cold front
Or that shines blazing fire like the sun in space
Still I come out looking fresh!

About this poem

This poem is about rising above all the travails we encounter in life. No matter the situation how terrible it may be, we always have to rise above them

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Written on November 14, 2022

Submitted by Karabelochadimo2022 on December 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A x bxxA ccA dddcA xxxA dbddA xxxxxxA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,240
Words 248
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 3, 5, 4, 5, 7

Karabelo Makhalemele

LLb student, author of Facebook blog Chadimo's local tidings and a versatile writer. more…

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