Love makes us



Love makes us tremble like young leaves,
For both of us are afraid of the same moment,
My beloved, you say very low, I love you so much
Let it go...Close your eyes...Do not speak...Be good.

I can tell you are close by the fire on your face
My feverish temple beats against your beating heart
And with my neck, in your arms, I shudder to feel
Your nacked throat and its shell-like freshness.

Listen to the wisteria quivering in the wind
It is evening, It is sweet to be alone on earth,
One to the other, mute and weak with desire.

With a delicate kiss, you open my eyelid;
I see you, and, confused, with a long sigh,
You smile in happy expectation of mystery.
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Written on August 12, 2022

Submitted by poeteecrivain0 on December 13, 2022

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 662
Words 140
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3

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