Lonely in a crowded room



Lonely in a crowded room

How can I be Lonely in a crowded room
Feeling empty like Im alone on the moon
A feeling of something sharp in my chest
Almost like I need a bullet proof vest
Lonely in a crowded room
If only I could fly away far from here
Would anyone even care
So much love around me
Nothings enough, I feel so empty
Lonely in a crowded room
Time goes by quickly and I can’t breathe
Feeling constricted so I rip off my sleeve
 Lonely in a crowded room
Time and time I pray it would be better
But my moods are like the weather
I am numb to the hope of being happy
Oh loneliness please set me free
As I sit here oh so Lonely in a crowded room
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Written on December 15, 2022

Submitted by marge_17 on December 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A axbbAxxccAxxAddcca
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 660
Words 143
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 18

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