Desert Flower (Magic Rain)



I cannot fight this feeling of needing
To see you again and again and again
Just like a flower needs water
I crave it, I want it, I need it
To me your touch is like magic rain

A rain of comfort
A wave of excitement
A tsunami of senses
A storm that could last

Cause being in the eye of the storm is a feeling
that reminds me
What it feels like to be home again
What it feels like to have an alive heart

So take over me like a hurricane
Take me by the roots
No matter how much it hurts
and set my soul free

I don't want to live in the desert
I don't belong here
Fly with me, take me higher
Take me somewhere we can just be

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A poem about hope of a better life together, somewhere far far away

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by venera_v on January 05, 2023

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCXD EXXX AFBX DXXF EXCF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 625
Words 139
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4

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