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You In the Morning

Brent Miller

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Bluebirds and flowers butterflies and rainbows           
trees in the autumn a single red rose
and you in the morning with your eyes closed
                                                                                                     A cool summer breeze and long lazy days
a full moon at night that lights the way
and you in the morning with your hair all astray

Our favorite song our special place
a kiss that lingers little girls dressed in lace
and you in the morning with a smile on your face

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woke up one morning and saw my wife still asleep and wrote this poem

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Submitted by brentm.18343 on December 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXXBB CCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 507
Words 79
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 3
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