Whoever You Are



Whoever You Are

Whoever you are
You are constant
When you came to me
You carried hidden secrets
Some inside you some unknown
A young woman riding on a steed of certainty
Symbols emblazoned on your armor
A world view beyond the senses
How was I to know
You needed me
For an earthly rendezvous
A short time on this rotating orb
Of evolving matter
Formed over eons
Out of forces underlying the universe
To become all we are
All we have become…

Whoever you are
You are constant
In your desires in your needs
Shaping my world around you
Two paths converged
When we traveled together
To islands and temples
In an early morning Sunrise
A union in the ruins of the Maya
A lark ascending
On the steps of a mountain
How was I to know
Where the journey would take us
To become all we are
All we have become…

Whoever you are
You are constant
In time your desires
Touched mine and brought us
New life to weave into our days and years
To be cared for in the constancy of our home
The rituals the special days
And the daily acknowledgements
Your touch on our lives was an extension of
Your upbringing and your meeting with
A seminal figure of the 20th century
How was I to know
Just how much these ideas
Would clothe your world and
Leave me living in the context
Of your cloth and your beliefs
To become all we are
All we have become…

Whoever you are
You are constant
The years have passed since our meeting
In the midst of the songs of Stillwater
And the promenade in Sutro Park
Our children’s births their needs and growth
The many joys and occasional disagreements
That punctuated all the upbringing
All the togethers the singing
And the occasional dancing
The moments of wonder and communion
That wove the tapestry of our union

Becoming all we are
All we have become…

About this poem

the lifetimes we spend with a friend a lover a mate a mother…

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Written on April 19, 2018

Submitted by beckertz on November 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,787
Words 350
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 17, 15, 18, 12, 2

Rainer Neumann

Since my retirement I have devoted my life to poetry and pastel drawings. I have had two exhibitions - Cafe Society 2017 and Ebbtide Cafe 2018 and have a current exhibit at HMB Coffee Company. Out of these exhibits I have published two exhibit books as well as a book of pastels produced over a 20 year period - “Fron Pigeon Point to Point Reyes”. Two poetry books - “Intersections of Concern” and “Our time has just begun” have also been published and are available on-line along with three books of fiction and two books of translation - a poetry book and a journal from the second world war. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem exudes a sense of deep love and appreciation for a special person in the poet's life. The repetition of the phrase "Whoever you are, you are constant" adds a consistent and powerful tone to the poem. The metaphors used to describe the relationship, such as the "rotating orb of evolving matter" and the "steps of a mountain", create imagery that beautifully captures the depth and evolving nature of their connection.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to include more specific details or anecdotes to further engage the reader. Adding specific memories or moments shared between the two individuals could make the poem even more personal and relatable. Additionally, varying the structure or rhythm of the poem could add some additional depth and interest.

    Overall, though, this poem is a lovely expression of love and gratitude. It evokes a sense of awe for the person being addressed and their impact on the poet's life and worldview. Great job!
     
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