The waves keep hitting
Deep breaths fill my lungs with cold air
not in a frigid way
but a way that is mostly mundane
makes my heart fill with despair
so strong it pulls me in like a riptide
feeling all alone with nobody by my side
i feel so vulnerable and bare
nobody seems to care
the emotions are flooding
i start to hear a thudding
it crashes
silence
it’s so bitter sweet
i know it’s over
but it will repeat
it comes in waves
makes me feel like i’m in a grave
will it get better
i don’t want to write one of those letters
the stronger and stronger it gets
the more i’m aware i’m gonna get hit
the waves keep hitting
instead of making it seem like i misbehaved
i decided to ride the wave
About this poem
this poem is about a coping technique called riding the wave and just letting the emotions hit you while you are overcoming the emotions.
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Written on November 16, 2022
Submitted by lubbersisabelle on November 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXX ABB AACC BDB XEDX XB C BE |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 699 |
Words | 154 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 4, 3, 4, 2, 1, 2 |
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