RUPTURED

Neeharika Singh 2006 (Patna)



You left your home to follow your passion
You left everything behind isn't it similar to subtraction?
You had to start from the low,
Thinking of the golden crown.
There were no chances of success
 But your never wore a frown.
You worked hard until you fainted,
Because you want this gloomy life of yours to be painted.
With extreme efforts and sleepless nights,
Starving days and fighting for your rights
You finally succeeded your life.
Everyone's here praising you
Saying they knew you could do,
You could see all of them
Who were the ones who disowned you then.

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I was feeling depressed and suddenly saw an franca of Jungkook of BTS which motivated me to stay happy...

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Written on October 05, 2022

Submitted by nschinchin on October 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABCDCEFGGHIIJK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 566
Words 110
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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