Own Thinking.



You're the driver of your destiny,
Passenger of none,
In control and looking forward
Of things that must be done

I'm living in my own little world.
I'm happy there, it's okay.
It's much more fun than the real one,
For the sun shines every day.

Some people say I'm stuck in this place
and I'll never go anywhere,
but in my dreams I've already been there.
I know someday I'll have to wake up,
but I feel the real world is more like a nightmare.

I know my world's not the real one.
It's only my world of make-believe.
But it's a world I often visit,
If it's only in my dreams.

-Abhi

About this poem

Lets just my thoughts and feelings alone and i just want to reach out my destiny with my own powers.

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Submitted by abhishekakamble5 on October 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XAXA XBAB XCCXC AXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 583
Words 132
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4

Abhishek Ashok Kamble

I am 25 year old and i love writing poems. I just put my thoughts and words together and what i fell i just write it down. more…

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