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OLDER CRUSHEE

Davis Raydon 2000 (Mumbwa)

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As all nations and individuals were conveying their sentiments about the Queen's death, I would rather be that one person who can be set to portraying your beauty and do it with mirth.

As people were mourning the queen around the Buckingham Palace, so have I been mourning when I see you around other men, I fail to be at peace. Will you consider my younger age or climb the stronger stage of my feelings for you?

Too good for Charles to be King of UK, too bad for me not to be King in your life, am I not OK? Being older qualifies him, Being younger disqualifies me. As God will save the King, he'll save me if to think like this about you is sin.

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Trying to express your feelings to an older Crushee. I.L.M of her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II

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Written on January 10, 2022

Submitted by davislubunda004 on October 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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