Loves Secret



Her heart betrothed,
Their souls entwined.
Feeling a drunken love,
like drinking vintage wine.

Too scared to be heard,
not knowing where to turn.
An longing for his love,
her heart does yearn.

Saddened still by his closeness,
aware of his thoughts.
His empty heart,
To her distraught.

Hopefulness gone?
No, like a faint breath, it remains.
Wanting his love,
to release these unseen chains.

But, her love for him will stay hidden,
like a timid white dove.
Till one day his heart reaches out,
For her undying love.

About this poem

This is a poem about a love I had that walked away. I remained in love and hopeful he would return even after 25 yrs of being apart.

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Written on October 17, 2022

Submitted by robint30 on October 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABX ACBC XXAA XDBD XBAB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 516
Words 112
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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