Losing A Child



Losing a Child

Losing a child is pure hell
It rips your heart out.
It tears you down to your very soul

Losing a child
Threatens your sanity
It kicks you down to your lowest point

Losing a child
Makes you feel like you should be the one in the casket
Makes you so depressed that you wish you were dead

Losing a child
Makes you so angry at God and you shout at Him and ask "Why?"

About this poem

This poem was written five years after my son passed away at twenty-eight. Writing this poem opened the flood gates of grief I had experienced after losing my first-born child. This poem is also an expression of the grief I feel five years after losing my daughter at thirty-four.

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Written on October 22, 2012

Submitted by sharonc.96900 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A xxx Axx Axx Ax
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 383
Words 86
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 2

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