Cold May

Mirza 2003 (Sarajevo)

Ode


Before you i was nothing 
An empty shell
Cold as a steal bell
Did i want to be dead
Or was it all in my head
I decided to just go to bed
In my dreams you appeared
And in the morning i wanted to cry
Even more i wanted to die
Somehow faith worked in my favour 
I didn't think of the danger
I didn't want you to be a stranger
You didn't do much
But i had this hunch
That your pretty eyes
Could tell no lies

That cold may night 
I wanted to hold you tight
Your eyes were so bright
That light would never go out
I had no doubt
I wanted to shout
You would be mine
Until the end of time

About this poem

I hope to show it to her one day

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Written on October 05, 2022

Submitted by mirza.paco19 on October 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAABBBXCCCDDXXEE FFFGGGXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 128
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 8

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