Unravel



You blew me away, like a
feather in the wind.
The very first second I saw you,
I knew there
was no way I could keep up.  You swept me
away with your wild currents.
When I first met you,
I thought, I was weak.
I thought you would surely extinguish my flame
with the tiniest whisper.
But you showed me that I
needed
you to be stronger,
that I needed you to burn brighter,
not because I was weak, not because I needed a man, but
because you were my
other half.

About this poem

This poem was written for a former lover.

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Written on 2017

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFCGHIJKIILJM
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 457
Words 101
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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