METAL VESSEL

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WAKE orders a blistering god
Vessel of metal, another of bitter bile
A soul contained in twain
Red burns on the corners of a mouth not yet their own
The absence of agony buzzes like the sun  
REJECT THYSELF another god orders, dark and silver
But mind bonded to metal
The vessel of flesh the soul rejects

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Written on November 02, 2022

Submitted by jeffl.43381 on November 02, 2022

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 306
Words 60
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8

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