Mad Bird



At night I lay with Whippoorwill song
And every star, conversation had
With some were short, and others long
But secrets were ceased by the prong
Of the interrupting bird, gone mad.

And soon those stars begin their retreat
As they fade away night after night
Taking with them my thoughts, discreet,
I drift off to dream, resting sweet,
Only to awake with such despite

The Whippoorwill cares not I’m weary
His song, and happy tune, no more.
What once was pleasing, made dreary
Through foggy, morning mist eerie
Another restless night encore.

About this poem

As a child I would try to sleep to the repetitive sound of a whippoorwill outside my window… I was just reflecting on this memory and started writing.

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Written on October 26, 2022

Submitted by raeraeusf on October 26, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAAB CDCCD EFEEF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 550
Words 103
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5

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