When your smile fade away



When your smile fade away,
Will you still be the same,
Will you try and stay
Holding me all the way?
When the sun will leave,
Will you follow it’s lead,
Will you leave me down,
Will my trust get drowned,
Will I be alone,destroyed,
Or in the sky,being loved?
With butterflies all around floating
With our hands tightly holding,
Will I be alive,complete,
Or just a simple,cold heartbeat?

About this poem

I wrote this poem,thinking about how people who love eachother would react when not everything is perfect in their relationship anymore.

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Written on September 21, 2022

Submitted by beatricecreta on September 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAACDEFDGHHDI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 387
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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