To the Looker-Backer Writing Sort of Folk



Let us instead write about moving forward
As a plane through unexpected turbulence
As a hound tromps through a door frame
As a toddler’s sticky hands seize wonder

Let us instead write about moving on
As summer embraces greater vibrancy
As painted leaves adorn themselves with glass
As frost forgets its bitterness, melting to green

Let us capture laughter and springtime
For it shall become light again
And the sun is just as bright as before
It was shrouded by grief

Let us bask in hope and beginnings
When regrets fade like afternoon shadows
And the night is no longer burdensome
Because tomorrow will dawn

About this poem

This poem captures a climax that is my twenty-fifth year. I had just lived what was perhaps the best and worst summer of my life in which jocund adventure and the darkness of loss melded. It was the summer of an exotic fairytale romance complete with dancing around fountains, overnight canoeing and wrangling an Emu. It was also the summer I unexpectedly lost my grandmother. Serendipity brought me to a summer camp, lending vibrant friendships that swiftly faded and dispersed. It was a summer of multiple beginnings and ends, and beginnings and ends all over. The dichotomy of experiences caused me to question and process why I am the way that I am and how I had spent each year up until that summer. I am continually challenged to move on and to seize life after a summer-and-a-quarter-life spent. 

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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by victosummer22 on September 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 619
Words 113
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Victoria S. Eilers

I strive to capture the wonder of life, wrap it in rawness, eloquence or simplicity and give it to another that they may feel less alone. I am a painter as well as a poet and financially support myself as an occupational therapy assistant. I enjoy the outdoors and using shopping carts as scooters to speed down the cereal aisle. I create because I serve a Creator and am treasured by Him through Christ. more…

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