Painful



                      PAINFUL

You hurt my heart as badly as my ribs
Then i breath and every single one aches endless emotional pain
You ruined my reason like a poisoned wine
You brutally smashed my brain
Like a break free train

To me a broken finger
seems better than a broken heart
Nobody can really fix it
Save the bullet from a skilled gun slinger

you abuse love like a harlot
absolute abomination if not profanity
If you please call it insanity
Then you seemed a drunkard pilot


I sipped from your taboo lips
And felt your venom inside my veins
At first that mystry was seductive
Though its true nature was destructive
I lost my way and drunk from a cursed cup
A dance in hell was inescapable trap

A stone straight through my forehead
I fell as if i was dead
The fall of goriath
A destination to death
I travel with a bleeding heart
The thorn haunt my heart

I was wrong all along
There is no umbrella for this pain rain

By Eric-Poetic Disaster
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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by poeticdisaster on September 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XAXAA BCXB DEED XXFFXX GGHHCC XA B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 984
Words 193
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 6, 6, 2, 1

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