Make Me Yours
Make Me Yours
I walked on the road answering my call, I nearly fall
But I didn't because there you were standing tall, built as a wall
There then I heard a fluttering in my heart though dull as it rang "make me yours"
In the morning we always went to the , I considered you my star
At noon,we carved the moon
I heard the fluttering in my heart now singing"make me yours"
You got on your knees,proposed to me
We got tats of a wing and also bought a diamond ring
The fluttering in my heart was screaming"make me yours"
As I collected my ring I heard a life shattering Bangg!!
A car ran passed, my beloved lay on the floor lifeless
He gave up the ghost with the words " I love you"
The fluttering in my heart disappearing "make me yours".
About this poem
In a few lines I give you a whole story. A story of love,fate and loss. Instead of writing a novel I write a poem.
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Written on September 23, 2022
Submitted by adindublossom2 on September 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A BBA XXA XCA CXXA |
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Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 739 |
Words | 151 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 3, 3, 3, 4 |
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