Judgemental society

Ngima yangzom 2005 (Kathmandu)



All eyes on me
Unknown about my own thing ;
Am I new to this game,
For  not knowing the great theme.

Hold me tight ,before I flows
Hold me loose ,so the eyes won't be close,
Marks on the hands
felt little proud
Who knew ,
I would come this far.

"Do what makes you happy "
Said with full hatred
"It's your life "
Said with overconfidence


My body ,your choice
My life, your rights ,
For a moment
Dream on wild .
Water dried ,leaves fall
But the mindset of yours
Never flies.

About this poem

This poem pours the feeling of a child who was bullied based on her appearance. A story which shows how has she been through while fighting other opinions.

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Written on September 16, 2022

Submitted by Nyimayangzom09 on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX XXXXXX AXXX XXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 484
Words 111
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 7

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