Slow Dancing In the October Rain



She is like a feather
that flows thru the air
never touching the ground
but always in the sky

As she stares up at the clouds she closes
her eyes
while the drops of water slowly
run down her face

She dances while the sky sings
the world watches her thru the looking glass
of fall
the orange leaves slowly blow away
as her hear sinks deep
 
the colorless world she's in
doesn't seem to understand her colors within
she dances without care she dances with understanding

The October rain is filled up with nothing but color and love as was she while I laid my finally rose in her grave

About this poem

This poem was made because my love of the rain and the season of fall I had lost people during this time which makes the hole fall season more meaning full It's a cold but warm feeling time.

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Written on September 30, 2022

Submitted by Jimenezx4x on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXXX AAX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 598
Words 128
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 3, 1

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