Hidden pain part one
40 tries, still heart beating. Why?
Anger and self hate consuming.
Pain. Pain. Pain.
40 still alive, growing closer to 20.
What if I had died?
13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.
6 soon to be 7 years of time, I no longer want to die?
I can’t stop thinking about release, yet nothing to be sad about.
I don’t know why, I just keep wanting sleep.
1am looking at the sky wishing the pain away.
War, pain, death <> Friendship, Kindness, Love.
Same coin flipping in the air in the air….
About this poem
If you or someone you is suffering from depression, seek help you don't need to fight it alone.
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Written on September 18, 2022
Submitted on September 18, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | AXX XXX AXX XXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 482 |
Words | 107 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3 |
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