His presence

Relebogile Mashigo 2006 (Pretoria)



Three years down the line
My heart still chooses you
How i hate to admit
That you play a melodious song
In my dismal life

When will you discern
The love i have for you
For it sparks so bright
Like your face under the ardent sun
Your presence blithes me

I see you persistently
How i wish you can approach me
For i have no guts
Because the fear of rejection haunts me
Periodically

But i see there's a lass
That you keep gazing upon
There goes my chance
Of owning your heart
Shout out to her
For she triumphed
Till she dismirches
I shall remain destituted

About this poem

This poem is about the failure of the poet in confessing their love to a boy that she likes and now she has to suffer the consequences of seeing him with someone else

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Written on August 20, 2022

Submitted by Releh on August 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABXX XAXXC CCDCC XXXXXXDB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 564
Words 120
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 8

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