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Freedom?

Aaron Acedo 1960 (calif)

If i were free i would have no pain inside of me
If i were free then i would have a reason to be
If i were free then i wouldn't have to look behind me          And i were free they wouldn't have to lock the doors behind me
And if i were free then i wouldn't have to be afraid of me
But if i was really free then i would have someone beside me
But since i'm not free my heart will be empty for eternity
But to free my mind i would have to die
Because i see no freedom

AARON A  5-10-14

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Written on May 10, 2014

Submitted by aaronacedo12 on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAAAXX X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 484
Words 107
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
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