Once Upon A Forever Love

Rachel Lee Khalaf 1983 (murrells inlet)



Once Upon a past memory
My head laid upon his chest
Soaked with the moment of pure LOVE
He held me so tightly and close
Covered me with such a deep feeling of him never letting go
Protected comforted
My soul soothed with the sound of his beating heart
With every breathe he took
deeper in Love I fell for him
breath in, breath out
His scent sparked every forever promise of him
He is the only one for me
I for him
My heart captured him and his name and forever lives within my heart
Rammie
Rammie!
He is loved by me  
Always and forever and a day
Your eyes are my eyes when open and closed

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Submitted by Empathylight83 on September 01, 2022

Modified by Empathylight83 on September 01, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcdefghijiaigIIakl
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 590
Words 121
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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