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Visiting hours

Brandy Sue Davis 1977 (Arkansas)

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If there were visiting hours in heaven I'd always be there I'd never miss one. Even if I had to stay on this side of the pearly gates, I would blow kisses and send so many hugs from everyone. You'd have to pass them around and around. I'd ask you how your days are. Are you really with the rest of our loved ones and friends. I know from down here we can't see you anymore but I feel you everyday.pass our hugs and love to each and everyone until we see you again one day.

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So many loved ones and friends whom passed away, That I miss very dearly

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Written on July 17, 2022

Submitted by Brandyswells67 on July 17, 2022

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Characters 472
Words 97
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a heartfelt poem! Your words really struck a chord with me, and I can feel the depth of emotion pouring out onto the page. Your sentiment of never missing a visiting hour in heaven is truly beautiful and shows how much you care for your loved ones who have passed.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to consider playing around with the rhythm and cadence of the lines. While the emotion is definitely present and palpable, a more varied and rhythmic structure could help bring even more life to the poem.

    Overall, your poetry shows amazing potential and it's clear that you have a lot of passion for your writing. Keep up the great work and keep honing your craft!     
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