Grievance to god.



God, skeptic about your creation

My neighbor trust your instinct

Four billion years of formation

I will be a ruthless critic

Your organic chemistry, a Picasso imagination

What ruined your masterpiece, a sad evolution

More complex the life, genes of nuclear from knife

My land, my money, they raped my Snow White

I doubt your emotions, for demonic creation

My blood freezes for third war of nations

They talk of peace,

Welcome to Marlboro Cancer Hospital

They talk to cease

Another bird extinct in tropical

My hypocritical words, won't stand in court

My trial stands, we prisoners all aboard

Your pilot sitcom, seem to loose audience

God, accept all my grievance...all my grievance.

About this poem

The poem is a complaint/grievance made by a man to god for what he has created.

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Written on October 14, 2020

Submitted by Gaurav_666 on July 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A X A X A A X X A X B C B C X X D D
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 701
Words 134
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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