Could I live without my Mother?



My mother is fifty five
One day she won't be here to hear me cry
about my pathetic, waste-o’-life
When the day comes for her to fall away.
A mass will freeze within my brain.
from joy again, I may abstain.
When the day comes for her to leave
I’ll leave it to my sister
to sort through her things.

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…could I?

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Written on August 05, 2022

Submitted by Qui_Exe on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEFGH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 300
Words 63
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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