Immortal



A part of me wish that I could stay with you forever. That would be so clever.
You and me happier than ever.
Like two birds of a feather.
I really don't know what that quote means...
But it's kind of sweet...

If you don't mind me saying.
We're a match made in heaven.
I 'am sorry that we are running out of time.
A part of me wish we can go back and unwind.

You are so kind.
I am so glad.
I saw you when the stars aligned.
I can go colorblind by the way you shine to me.

My honey, you are amazing...
We share one mind, that's well-defined.
We can blow peoples minds,
When we raise the window blinds.
When I look into your eyes. I know that you are mine.
To the end of time.
You fell in love with me unconditionally.
I feel my heart capsizing.
Despite my future demise.
Please don't cry.

I realize....
I was happier not knowing, sadness is overflowing.
We were happier not knowing, we have to keep going. But I guess not knowing was killing me.
I allow the cancer to flow within me.
How I envy to be healthy...
I wish we were wealthy.
We are in love and that is plenty.
It's not about the money.

I want to get comfy and watch a movie with my dude.
I want to spin the remaining of my days with you.
Not only that, but I cannot lie.
I can't live without you.
No matter how hard I've tried.
You always find a way.
To come along for the ride.
Because you are my guy.
It will be really hard for me to say goodbye.

Then I can hear you say.
Babe, don't leave me. Please stay.
Just believe me when I say.
We're going to be okay.
I love you, Babe.
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Submitted by KianaDawn on July 28, 2022

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,575
Words 363
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 10, 8, 9, 5

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