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Loneliness

Farhat Zakir 1978 (Karachi)

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I can see a stream of pain,
Reaching to my heart,
Giving it a warm feeling,
A feeling of emptiness ,
The feeling I cant behold,
Craving badly to reach,
Reach to your heart,
And give you the same feeling,
The feeling of emptiness,
Without me, and my touch,
Your love and your life,
Is mine, coz I am yours,
Please come back,
M lonely without you

About this poem

I wrote in the moment when i was missing my beloved husband Zakir Ali Awan.

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Written on July 21, 2022

Submitted by farhataliawan on July 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFBCDGHIJK
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 346
Words 79
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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Farhat Zakir

I am from Pakistan writing poetry since 2000 in Poetry. Com, my three poems were nominated for competition as well, Poetry is my Passion i do poetry for my inner satisfaction. So my all poetry comes from my heart more…

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  • Dougla$Irishman
    Dougla$Irishman
    Your poem describes a relationship that is not blooming, move on and your life will eventually find it Loneliness is part of our life, embrace it !
    You have just a lonely poem !
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Dougla$Irishman
    Dougla$Irishman
    The marriage vows - till death to us part and loneliness will be your constant friend or foe !
    So become a poet and dream on !
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • farhataliawan
      farhataliawan
      thanks for comments but do tell how's the poem??
      LikeReply1 year ago

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