A Perfect World



A Perfect World

I would like to have a world with no kind of war
i would like to have a world where everyone is in peace
i would like to have a world where no one is in suffering
i really want a world where everyone could love each other.

I would like a world where everyone is cancer free
i would like a world where there's no need of a wheel chair
i really want a world where's there no illness of any kind
i really want a world with no conditions
and all minds will be free of any kind of madness.

We know this planet is so big,
but everyone can be a controller of their actions
we don't need rules, laws, amendments
we all have the real key
to make our planet a perfect world.

I would like a world where everyone can walk safe with no fears
i would like a world when people say bless you and feel it from the heart
i would like a world with no lies and nothing to hide
i really want a world where all the words comes out clear and pure.

I would like a world where there's no need of governments
i would like a world where your land is yours and don't afraid of losing it
i would like a world where there's no need of any fighting
i really want a world where you respect and be respected everytime.

I would like to have a world where are no homeless
i would like to have a world as much perfect it can be
i really want that everyday will be with more shiny days
where there's no kind of offenses that won't hurt us each other
never never again in a perfect world.

About this poem

This writing is about this world to be a place free of violence and a better world for society in general to live.

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Written on July 10, 2022

Submitted by BamilMusicPoetry369! on July 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XXBC DXXEF XEGDA XXXX GXBX FDXCA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,472
Words 312
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5

Bamil Gutierrez

BAMIL is a Puerto Rican multi-instrumentalist, singer-songwriter, Poet, engineer and record producer. His work can be found on the award winning productions with smooth jazz 'Elements 119', hard rock 'Buildings, Roads + Minds' and on his solo works. more…

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